Home’s where you go when you run out of homes.
― John le Carré, The Honourable Schoolboy
Welcome to this week’s Poetry 1o1 Rehab Prompt.
My prompt is ROOTS.
This week, I have returned to my roots, or at least returned in a virtual sense through a collection of random memories of the place where I first became conscious.
I have been lucky, since then I have travelled far and wide. Yet, the echoes of long ago dreams, and nightmares, are never far away.
So, what do your roots mean to you?
of smoking chimney stacks
of green painted market stalls
of crumbly cheese, tripe, and onions
of foul smelling rivers
of windswept moors
of a red chair, that became too small
of ejector seats, deployed, in the surgery
of sweetie jars, all in a row
of sixpences, thre’penny bits, half crowns, and sovereigns
of windswept moors
of odds and sods, screws and nails
of rainy dark skies
of closed doors, closed hearts, closed minds
of spaceships, in closets
of windswept moors
of a marshal’s shiny star, they said it was real
of stone steps, push chair straps, and a broken nose
of water butts, deep, dark, repositories of long lost (toy) cars
of standing in the kitchen sink, to watch the steam train far below
of windswept moors
of coal fires, and coal sheds
of swings and slides
of snowflakes floating endlessly down from dark grey skies
of tiger and serpent, forever entwined
of windswept moors
of dank rhododendrons
of dreams and nightmares, wasps in curtains, statues in corridors
of incense and guilt, prayers and pain
of scuffed knees, thorny rose scratches
of windswept moors
of dandelion and burdock
of all things, bright and beautiful
of painted plastic caravelle, sausage, and chips
of salt and vinegar crisps
of windswept moors
of thunderbirds, captain scarlet, and rock snakes on mars
of trickling streams
of janet and john
of yetis and daleks, coal fired viewing
of windswept moors
of adventures climbing green wet walls, behind the shed
of walking by farms, hands held, one old, one young
of a big blue car with a bold white stripe
of biggles and (just) william
of windswept moors
of a (toy) cable car, exotic tales, faraway places
of bicycles and tricycles
of black and white
of library smells, pages (life) unfolding
of windswept moors (dark tales of what happened there)
of saying goodbye
of these,
i think, when remembering
my roots, and
the dreams, i had
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Wonderful memories 🙂
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I agree! I think there’s something for everyone in your poetic list 🙂
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Perhaps a little too much also.
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there’s always the next prompt… 🙂
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Thank you, I think the memories were quite mixed but it was an interesting experience to write them down in this form.
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A powerful and daring põem, not least because of the decision to begin almost every line with the word ‘of’ with its echoes of provenance. And you got the ‘foul-smelling river’ in there too! Congratulations.
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Thank you, I am glad you liked this one!
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Lovely poem, Andy!
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Thank you!
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Roots: a prose poem – http://wp.me/p5BCD4-o8
I was fortunate to grow up in a small, rural village with clean rivers, swimming lakes within walking distance, and pastures and fields where we could safely roam at any time of day or night. The time I spent wandering alone throughout my childhood was beautiful and idyllic. Reading your poem, Andy, I suspect that I have carried that sense of safety with me throughout my life, even though I left that village (now classified as a city) at age 17 for college and careers.
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Thank you for this one, I like the style that you used and a very soothing tale too.
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Thank you, Andy. Looking back over the decades, it is apparent to me that growing up when and how I did, played its own part in shaping my life. Your list and mine (not enumerated) do have similarities. 🙂
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It was certainly a fascinating experience. The life I live now, the world, is very distance from the place in which I spent my first six years…
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Here is my take on this week’s prompt https://oudeis2005.wordpress.com/2016/01/19/young-carrots/
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Excellent on many levels.
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A wonderfully designed list of seemingly random memories woven together by threads of “windswept moors,” weather, moisture, color (or lack of), combinations.
An incredible journey into your roots!
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed the journey!
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Beautiful. As always , you have written an inspiring piece.
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Thank you, this was an interesting one to write.
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That’s such a great poem!
There are just so many images, emotion and so carefully embedded within your lines ❤
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Thank you, I actually tapped most of this one out on my phone when I was taking photos for another post, then made some final edits sitting on the metro on the way home. I like to write that way so that I don’t lose the immediacy of the idea.
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And I think it really works great for you this way 😉
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Thank you, when I try to write poems I can’t so I have to seize the moment when I can!
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Your poem provides insights into a childhood world — seen from the adult/child perspective. Excellent! And great prompt too.
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Brilliantly executed Andy! the force of the repetition always brings us back to the anchor point – and each stanza offers memories and insights in ambiance – both innocent and dazzling and dark and frightening. Truly well penned 🙂
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it and that repetition was a good, rather than a bad, device.
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Even though i have grown up on the other side of the world in a different atmosphere i still felt happy and nostalgic. Truly beautiful!
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Thank you, the poem actually gave me mixed feelings so I’m glad it made you feel happy!
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Hi, everyone! Hope your week is going well. Here are my roots!
https://writersdream9.wordpress.com/2016/01/21/disconnected/
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Thank you for dropping by!
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Oh, I’ve a flash fiction for this! (From another prompt):
Snails and Oysters
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Thank you for sharing it with us!
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I finally finished my poem entitle Roots: https://noos2mee2.wordpress.com/2016/01/22/roots/
I hope you like it!
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An excellent take on roots, and quite scary.
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Nice poem! It really drives home where your roots are.
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Thank you, although sometimes I’m glad I pulled them up…
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I am not quite punctual but I guess it doesn’t really matter 🙂
Here’s my take on the prompt:
https://schattenengel.wordpress.com/2016/01/25/roots/
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The Rehab has loose rules which are poorly applied, thank you for contributing!
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