The body, she says, is subject to the force of gravity. But the soul is ruled by levity, pure
― Saul Bellow
a lifetime ago, this hand held
a new life, eyes barely open
(and more since, after that first new
life)
a weight lifted
a weight forever to carry
(whatever)
and now
that new life
will soon
also bring (its own) new life
the weight will lift again
and once more
become heavier,
and lighter
for wordpress weekly photo challenge – weight(less)
see also weightless on belgianstreets
Beautiful and poignant thoughts.
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Thank you!
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I love this and so look forward to being a grandma.
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Thank you, I’m still pondering over what it means… 😉
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Very touching, Andy. Also: it sounds like congratulations might be in order soon?
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Thank you Ben, yes! Waiting for my first born daughter to give birth to her first child and my first grandchild – scary and beautiful at the same time.
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This is beautiful poetry, Andy…life begets life and so it continues
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Thank you, and long may it continue so!
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You are welcome…and, yes 🙂
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Beautiful story, it shows the pretty stuff of repeating cycles.
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Some cycles are worth repeating…
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…and thank you.
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A poem filled with wonder and expectation, Andy. I pray all goes well.
janet
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Baby, and mother (daughter) both well and thank you Janet!
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Great news, Andy. Enjoy!!!
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Thank you, trying to adjust to being called ‘grandpa’ when I still feel (inside) as if I were a nervous 15 year old boy..l
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I can well imagine. 🙂
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well congrats in order – and may you and your family be blessed 🙂
this poem of yours – it really speaks of the duality of the nature of the cycle – that without the one – the weight – which bears down – there can be no lightness in life …. which … come to think of it …. is equally spoken of even in child birth …. my … seems you have triggered a cycle within a cycle 🙂 and great image to accompany the thoughts
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Thank you, I am very happy my poem, written in haste, provoked such a response 🙂
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I am feeling so inspired 😀 !
This one is great. It’s thougthful and the rhythm is carrying your words along.
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See,… inspiration hit me (again) while reading yoour poetry 🙂
Therefore this one’s dedicated to your and your poem
Weigh Me Down
I am watching while the feather
Showed it’s love for the ground
– Because it sure has to be love
Since a feather is supposedly weightless –
As the inexplicable attraction
Slowly draws the feather closer
And closer. Until it tied itself
To the marbly soul underneath.
I wonder why it’s giving up on
The weightless feeling,
The careless floating,
The boundless freedom…
Then with a resigned sigh
– A flash of past events
Ever present in my mind –
I think about you and me.
How you weighed me down
Until I was barely close enough
To become completely tied to you.
Suddenly, my heart weighs tons.
https://schattenengel.wordpress.com/2016/01/13/weigh-me-down/
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What a beautiful poem and I touched by your dedication, and by your continued support for the Rehab, I almost decided to close it but support like yours helped me decide to continue 🙂 so thank you…
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Thank you, that means a lot to me as this one I also like myself…
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Thought I sent well wish regards. Must have forgotten to tap Post Comment 🙂
I’m a Grama twice over. Son of Son is 5 and Little Miss 2. 🙂
Best to everyone.
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Thank you, and very best wishes to you and yours also!
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Just got news a cousins daughter is expecting. Babies are still being born! Yeah!
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Congratulations, the world keeps turning 🙂
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