seconds (out)

once a man, like the sea I raged,
once a woman, like the earth I gave

lyrics from the cinema show, seconds out, genesis


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seconds are infinitesimal counting down seconds out but wait stop all the clocks what the hell is time anyway roll back the clock fast forward freeze frame pause seconds out

game >

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writing 101 | poetry | four | seconds | prompt by rosemawrites

 

20 thoughts on “seconds (out)

  1. the image – the quote/lines and your poem – really captures and essence … fleeting …. still … a rush …and it works so well together …. a sense of urgency … and the way you chose to present your thoughts – reads very stream of consciousness and it works to emphasize the feelings and sensations – really digging this Andy ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. LOL … perhaps a “deliberate” stream ๐Ÿ˜‰

        but it works as it is … and that’s what counts ๐Ÿ˜€

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