poetry 101 rehab: recycle

Photo 10-05-15 11 59 36

real world in trouble
everyone lives in a bubble
does any one care about the trouble
under so much rubble
can it really be so much trouble
eventually -
real world in trouble
everyone lives in a bubble
under so much rubble
so, are we really in trouble
eventually -
real world in trouble
everyone lives in a bubble
can it really be so much trouble
yes, they will burst our bubble
can it really be so much trouble
look out, I told you, they’re really gonna burst our bubble
eventually -

 

(for mara’s poetry 101 rehab – recycle)

*shot with iphone 5, edited in snapseed mobile,  adverbs reduced, reused and recycled*

31 thoughts on “poetry 101 rehab: recycle

  1. Strangely enough, this reminds me of the song “Uprising” by Muse. I love your recycling very much, including the reduced, reused and recycled adverbs, and the gorgeous photo, which I wish I had taken myself. I bow to your skills.

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