sprinkled
stirred
added
to mask
to obscure
reality harsh bitter life
a cube
a grain
a sprinkle
is that all it takes
to taste
better?
(for mara eastern’s poetry 101 rehab – sugar)
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The grain of the photo is quite appropriate to the subject!
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Thank you Hadley! I am glad you didn’t feel my post was against the grain 😉
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That is a pretty amazing poem – I love the photo as well! I especially like the strikethrough line in the middle and the idea of sprinkles. Cute!
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Thank you Mara…you have a way of making the mundane sparkle, and your prompts inspire us, keep it up!
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Such a sweet one! Awesome! 🙂
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Thank you Prakash!
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Sweet is the best word for this 😉 @Prakash Hegade .
I loves how you broke the words into lines. It emphasizes your every words greatly.
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Thank you!
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Love the thought behind! Very well put. 🙂
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I love how you broke up each line – the format gives it a sort of slowed down, thoughtful quality. Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thank you very much, I am still experimenting so it means a lot to receive comments like yours!
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You’re very welcome, and I look forward to more poetry 🙂
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More to come soon, thanks again!
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Love the bleakness here!
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Thank you!
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Very welcome 🙂
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Enjoyed your poem! The sweetness of the subject certainly helps alleviate the bitterness we encounter in life…
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Thank you!
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