like an iceberg, broken away
i drift, dwindle, diminish
current taking me away
others float, others diminish
my path uncharted
where will i finish
will it ever end, or just diminish
fade away, or, as it started
end, in
collision
(for mara’s poetry 101 rehab)
This poem moves like an iceberg–undulating yet rigid. It gives a mood consistent with the imagery. Very much enjoyed.
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Thank you John, writing poetry is rather new to me, so I really appreciate those words!
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Now I finally know how it was with the Titanic. It was you! A lovely poem and a lovely panel photo – thank you for sharing these gems for my rehab!
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Thank you for opening the doors to the clinic, and for your inspiration…
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It’s you, the patients, who make the clinic.
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very clever how you displayed these photos, you always must take ages over your posts
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Thank you, you are very kind. This is actually one shot and I used a filer in Analog Efex Pro 2 to create the multi shot effect, cheating really…
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Very clever cheating nonetheless!!
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Thank you for accommodating my cheating behaviour!
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Haha… but it’s creative so that’s cool !
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Well thank you again, I will keep looking for new “creative” angles, have a great day!
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You too!
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You have an extraordinary talent of combining photography with poetry. Keep it flowing!
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Well thank you very much for that!
The poetry side is new to me but I do enjoy it.
A lot!
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The feeling of despair is rising while continuing to read your poem. Your word are reaching out like someone trying to get hold of something as to not drown or to not get lost in the depths of the artic ocean.
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Thank you for that poetic response to my words which capture so well the thoughts I had when writing!
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Seems like you made them clear then 😉
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So it seems… 😉
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No matter the unnoticed and unclassified cheating, this post is superb.
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Thank you, I am enjoying the process of mixing prose, poetry and photography more every day, so I appreciate your appreciation 🙂
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That’s wonderful to express yourself so creatively and you can count on my membership to the fan club.
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It’s possible to express oneself amongst a community of good and supportive friends…like you…
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I’m honored to be part of this community and to deserve your consideration. Thanks.
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Likewise!
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