poetry 101 rehab: thaw


like an iceberg, broken away

i drift, dwindle, diminish

current taking me away

others float, others diminish

my path uncharted

where will i finish

will it ever end, or just diminish

fade away, or, as it started

end, in


(for mara’s poetry 101 rehab)

24 thoughts on “poetry 101 rehab: thaw

  1. The feeling of despair is rising while continuing to read your poem. Your word are reaching out like someone trying to get hold of something as to not drown or to not get lost in the depths of the artic ocean.

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