Do you miss the Writing 201 Poetry course by the Daily Post? Then join this blogging challenge, Poetry 101 Rehab, that will provide your poetry fix!
How does it work?
For several weeks now, each Monday at 01:00 pm UTC, Mara Eastern has published a poetry prompt along with her response to it, you can see them all here. On 30 June, Mara announced that she is taking a blogging hiatus this Summer to focus on her dissertation. I am serving as locum “poet in residence” at the clinic until her return – and hope that I don’t lose any of her patients! I will continue to publish a weekly prompt exactly as before.
You are invited to answer the prompt, twist it or ignore it; write a poem of your own or share a poem by another author.
I would love to hear about your inspiration, your creative process or other poetry related thoughts, but this is no way obligatory. Nothing is obligatory in this challenge, the idea is to get together, talk poetry and have fun!
How can you take part?
Anyone can participate, anytime you want. Publish your poetry post and add a link to it by clicking on the Poetry 101 Rehab badge below or share your link in a comment. Use the tag Poetry 101 Rehab, so we can find each other in the Reader.
I will act as your host, and I’ll be here for you to reply to your comments, read your poetry, like and comment. While this post is the starting point for the challenge, do visit fellow poets in the link-up and chat to them on their blogs!
This week’s prompt is COULDN’T.
COULDN’T
couldn’t
couldn’t count the times
couldn’t overcome the feeling
couldn’t understand
couldn’t let go
couldn’t do it again
couldn’t notice
couldn’t try any harder
couldn’t
My response, COULDN’T was randomly selected (again) by taking the first word of the tenth line of chapter eight of Norwegian Wood by Haruki Murakami (iBooks edition). What will your take on the keyword COULDN’T be? Blog about it in a poetry post and share your link in the comments section of this post and by clicking on the Poetry 101 Badge above.
How nice of you to help Mara while she is working hard.
You are doing a very good job as this post is excellent. The prompt is interesting and your interpretation is brilliant.
Kudos!
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Thank you Lucile, Mara did a great job building this clinic so I hope I keep it safe until her return…
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You’re ! No doubts.
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Well, I will do my best…
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Fantastic interpretation. Loving your work, as always.
Here is my contribution: https://literaryfuzz.wordpress.com/2015/08/10/poetry-101-rehab-couldnt/
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Thank you Jordan, and for your excellent and very painful contribution to the clinic!
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Oh my, you’re reading/writing my mind, Andy! Great prompt, will work on it later…
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I really like yours a lot, Andy! It’s concise–and so familiar, easy to relate to. Here’s mine:
https://wealthofruins.wordpress.com/2015/08/10/couldnt-poetry-101-rehab/
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Thank you, and yours is a very clever take on the prompt!
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Thank you, Andy.
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Thank you, look forward to seeing it 🙂
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It was posted earlier, titled “Couldn’t”.
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Thanks! I found it, I think I am working through my comments in the wrong order today 😉
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Hahahahahaha–that’s the way it goes with blogging some days!
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I did today’s poem. Hope you enjoy it! Here is the link: https://kaitlynfranzone.wordpress.com/2015/08/10/monday-poetry-couldnt/
At the end there is a link to my post before this one explaining my relationship with my nanna.
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Thank you for a very moving and beautiful contribution to the rehab…
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thank you for the prompt.
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Hello 🙂 Here’s my poem: http://876lover.com/2015/08/10/what-you-can-do/
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Thank you for a very positive and heartwarming response to the prompt!
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This feels familiar, I love your poem, Andy.
Here is my version, with the “couldn’t” woven secretly in: https://tuckedintoacorner.wordpress.com/2015/08/11/poetry-101-rehab-couldnt/
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Thank you so much! And for your superb contribution, brimming with (painfully familiar) concepts and I love the structure…
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Here is my short abstract take on this prompt, preceded, as is my wont these days, by a probably over-lengthy preamble. https://oudeis2005.wordpress.com/2015/08/12/couldnt/
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Thank you for another great contribution!
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Did you read this poem by smzang? https://wordpress.com/read/post/feed/193451/776756937 It is one of the best I have read on WordPress. Extraordinary control of rhythm and tone.
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Thanks for the tip, a very calming read…
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Hi Andy, here’s my contribution to this week’s prompt. I started off with something altogether lighter in mind, but it became … this https://altheauthor.wordpress.com/2015/08/13/the-evil-inside-poem/ . Looking forward to checking out everyone else’s now 🙂
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Thank you for an excellent contribution!
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Hey!! Here’s my poem for this week:
https://apoorvakulkarni.wordpress.com/2015/08/13/couldnt/
Thank you for such a stimulating theme!!
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Thank you for sharing a very moving and dark poem..
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Thank You Andy!! Sometimes the darkness within just bursts out..
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Thank you!
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this tugged, I could feel the despair x
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Thank you, I couldn’t help myself….
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Hiya Andy! Loved your poem and especially this week’s prompt! I am very, very late to the party – (sorry!) – but I’ve been thinking about the prompt all week, so felt I MUST write it up – if only to make the other shoenistas out here feel at home!
http://motherhendiaries.com/2015/08/14/woulda-shoulda-couldnt/
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A great contribution, thank you!
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Thanks for another great prompt Andy. Here is my take http://wp.me/s3EbHY-couldnt. Now to get to read all the other responses I couldn’t get to earlier in the week 😉
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Thank you Heid, and for your very short poem and a point well made!
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Cheers Andy
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I couldn’t blog this poem until now but I really wanted to.
I find it kind of funny though that I already wrote this one last week and I found it would do great for the rehab once I’ve read your blog this Monday.
And I your poem is so captivating. The emotions are uncovered and that’s really powerful.
So here is my poem “I Couldn’t Breathe”
https://schattenengel.wordpress.com/2015/08/15/916/
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Thank you! I think your poem is perfect for the prompt!
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The initial “inspiration” for the poem, “Couldn’t Ever” – http://wp.me/p5BCD4-aO – was the approaching celebration of a wedding anniversary; I realized, however, that it also reflects my feelings about relationships among my siblings, other family members, and the growing circles of “chosen family” members.
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A beautiful poem, thank you for continuing to attend the rehab Liz!
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Thank you for your poem, Andy. That worked nicely. Enjoyed in particular the beat of the lines working together.
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Thank you Liz, and I liked the simplicity and elegance of your own contribution this week.
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