in the space, of a day
what would you say
all the things, you wanted to say
those things about love and longing, fancies and fears
things about war and want, famines and floods
or, maybe just a few words about the space
the space where she lay
in just the space
of a day
(for mara eastern’s poetry 101 rehab – day)
andy townend 
The day when I will meet you
Falling in love,
Fading out of reality,
Falling into my dreams.
I am staying behind,
Waiting for the day
To finally come.
Impatiently because of you.
Incomplete without you.
Impossible not to love.
Make the day come
And let me know when –
I need the day to be.
The day we will happen.
The day we will start…
To pass every day together.
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You have made me thinking of my first stanza which was an unfinished poem I tried to finish the whole last week.
I am so happy that you did because now I have finished it and I am so happy how it turned out 🙂
Thank you!
I love your poem your choice of words and the flow of your rhytmic pattern makes it feel like a dream. And yet the feelings seem all so incredibly real.
You are a great writer. There’s no doubt about that.
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What a beautiful poem, and I am so humbled that my scribbled words gave you this inspiration, thank you so much!
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By the way… I mentioned you under my blog post since your poem was an inspiration too 🙂
I hope you don’t mind. If you do just tell me and I am going to change it.
https://schattenengel.wordpress.com/2015/04/20/the-day-when-i-will-meet-you/
If you want to take a look .
Enjoy your Monday!
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I am humbled and thank you very much!
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Lovely Andy – longing and love and nostalgia. Beautiful.
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Thank you, a poem about a special place, I’m happy you liked it.
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Lovely as usually, and almost uncharacteristically romantic-ish 😉 Especially the intertwined swans, which again make a perfect fit with your words.
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The swans image is awesome!
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Thank you, a lucky shot, and some heavy editing…
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