fragmented he sees
dark thoughts they may yet not drown
shift and twist inside
(water, a haiku for day one of Writing 201)
water
fragmented he sees
dark thoughts they may yet not drown
shift and twist inside
(water, a haiku for day one of Writing 201)
andy townend 
A powerful photo plus poem. If you need to drown some dark thoughts, may I suggest a larger puddle? Just in case…
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Thank you! Perhaps like dark waters run deep, the puddle is larger on the inside than it seems?
And, I just managed to weave a simile into my post after all…
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You’re smart. You made it.
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With a little help… 🙂
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Beautiful words!!!
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Thank you, much appreciated!
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Wonderful take on the prompt. Honestly, I got nothing to add, this is perfect as it is. 🙂
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Thank you, really appreciate your comment as poetry is outside my comfort zone…
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Oh really, wow. Because you are good at it. I’m glad you joined writing201 then 😄
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Thank you Ameena, you are very kind!
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Exceptionally good! 🙂
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Thank you Pradesh!
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wonderful and you managed to add a photo, you are inspiring x
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Thank you Justine…you are very kind…
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only speaking the truth, i attempted mine today just now x
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Will look!
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